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Comments for 'Brutus, the Spartans, two AIs and the Pirate Fleet (Part 1)' |
Arthur Wellesly
7:12 pm | April 12, 2003
"Augustus" means "Revered One" so it definitely could have been one of his many names, for he certainly was revered. Though I've never heard that he had three previous names. Gaius Julius Caesar was his full name, though ever since Shakespeare he's been called Ol' Julie.
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Traumatised Marine
6:03 pm | April 12, 2003
Thanks Aurthur!
Addressing the indents stuff, for what it's worth, all my posts from now on shall have them.
And as for the 'Augustus Ceaser' You lot have got to be careful, Julius Ceaser changed his name several times, in fact 'Julius Ceaser' was his third new name, I believe.
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gruntkiller
3:21 pm | April 12, 2003
you got your roman history wrong brutus killed ceasar
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Arthur Wellesly
12:43 pm | April 12, 2003
Goddamnit, if indenting is so Goddamn difficult screw it. Why bother? Sure it is "grammatically correct" but in the face of having to keep putting [indent] its use is minimal.
Anywho, I know how you hate going off topic with these things, TM, so I'll get to the point: AWSOME STORY!! I've been really busy lately so sorry for the late post, but time certainly has little effect on the on-going quality of your writing and the cleverness of your plots. I loved your idea of cloning a Covenant Elite. The sheer brilliance of it alone makes it worthwhile to read the rest of the series even if your writing style didn't have the genius it currently possesses.
9.8/10. Excellent story TM! Keep writing!
*Note: It was Julius Caesar Brutus betrayed. Augustus hunted him down and slit his throat.
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Dispraiser
7:15 pm | April 11, 2003
"god dispraiser you get ticked off with something that little. are you truly that pathetic that you can't read a fan fic without the indent. "
Why is every so pissed off at me (though I am not the only one who requests indents) for asking for indents? It shows that an author cares to paste something a few times and shows competence. I gave him a free service so taht I would indent his fanfic for him! But, whatever, I'm done with this comment section...
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monitor101
5:00 pm | April 11, 2003
Pretty good TM! Keep them coming!
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gruntkiller
10:44 pm | April 10, 2003
god dispraiser you get ticked off with something that little. are you truly that pathetic that you can't read a fan fic without the indent.
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Dispraiser
8:35 pm | April 10, 2003
I haven't read it nor will I because of the little indent thing (email your fanfic to me and I will indent the thing!) I have looked at your comments. As the king of offtopicness in Halo fanfics I can assure you that given you bring mention to the Covenant, the Flood, Halo or ONI and the UNSC you will be fine. My last fanfics (all three of them) have held on by only a single common link, more often the Spartans and my latest one only bears mention to ONI. Make sure you let me indent them...
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Traumatised Marine
5:11 pm | April 10, 2003
This is destined to be a LONG series, and with the vast scope it has (as a couple of you have already mentioned) you can expect some nice plot twists along the way.
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Steele
11:45 am | April 10, 2003
9.3/10. Yes indeed this story does leave alot of possibilities. I can understand your not indenting them, but maybe you should at least return between each paragraph. It makes it easier to read. And, HEY! I was working on one involving pirates. I keep at least three different series going at once. But anyway, keep it up.
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James Kinsella
11:04 am | April 10, 2003
Once again I offer my services to indent the paragraphs. I hope you take this seriously. As for your story, I feel that it was incredible. It also has almost unlimited possibilities as to how it turns out. Submit the next one soon!(Send it to me to indent first though!)
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Tank
5:35 am | April 10, 2003
Welcome comeback of The Tour characters! And a brilliant start to what looks to be an epic series, TM!!
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el_halo_diablo
2:15 am | April 10, 2003
hmm, I didn't really read the tour, but this story was quite entertaining.
Straying off-topic, I'm thinking of makin' a halo based flash movie, set to some pretty good music. if anyone thinks I should do it, or wants to give me more ides, my email is funkmonker3lite@hotmail.com and my AIM screen name is smoshmonker.
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gruntkiller
10:55 pm | April 9, 2003
sweet it realy tied in well with the tour
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Jamirus99
10:42 pm | April 9, 2003
An exciting beginning to a series I am sorry that I wasn't able to help with. Best of luck, TM, in what will hopefully be a great series without me.
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