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Comments for 'Human Elite Ch 4'



Sage
7:34 am | February 17, 2004
good stuff, PLEASE WRITE MORE!
Sentinel
4:45 pm | November 28, 2003
Better than the rest!
Keyes
12:44 pm | November 13, 2003
need another
Anonymous
1:48 am | November 9, 2003
Please write another
Anonymous
1:47 am | November 9, 2003
hello???????????????
anybody ???????????
need another one
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
4
5:55 pm | November 1, 2003
dude when is the next 1 comin out?
Myth
11:54 am | October 20, 2003
ditto .fortune
Master_Chief189
3:05 pm | October 19, 2003
9/10
Alpaca
11:47 am | October 19, 2003
Watch your grammar, spelling, puctuation.

Love the plot line.
.fortune
10:15 am | October 19, 2003
great stuff...going well, but write some more soonish.
Hawk7886
7:03 am | October 19, 2003
I like your attitude, you seem like you have fun writing.

You made the same mistakes as the last one: You forgot to capitilize the races. Jackal, Grunt, Elite, and Hunter must always be cap'ed.

8/10
J-117
3:30 am | October 19, 2003
WHOA nice shit bro, u should do an art piece of what the boy looks like now.


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