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 Comments for 'The Forerunner's Fate (2)'		  | 
	 
 
  
	
		
			No one  
8:44 pm | May 6, 2004 
			It's a good plot/story but could u please write more instead of that little page and a half.
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			spectre  
2:18 pm | May 6, 2004 
			Yea, I'd like it a little better if I had incorporated more action. But that's not what this chapter was for. Thanks Main( I copied the code off the comments board, so that was a big help.). And evryone else for reading.
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			Mainevent  
11:09 am | May 6, 2004 
			To do the page break-****************- type [hr].
  And you should italicize the ship name, not embolden it.
  Otherwise, it was pretty good.  Poor, poor Tashano.
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			CoLd BlooDed  
2:44 am | May 6, 2004 
			Well done, very well done indeed.  Yeah, once you use page breaks ([hr]) you'll be good to go.
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			SeverianofUrth  
10:48 pm | May 5, 2004 
			I want to see the next one.
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			SOS.Odin  
8:08 pm | May 5, 2004 
			good job  workin up to be a good fan ficker
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			D4rj0n7  
7:10 pm | May 5, 2004 
			Great story spectre, i want to see where this goes
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			Helljumper  
6:03 pm | May 5, 2004 
			yes, yes u did good job son. story was creative and i want to see where this is going. it was a little story.
  ODST
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			spectre  
5:06 pm | May 5, 2004 
			See I used the code this time.
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