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Comments for 'The Forerunner's Fate (2)'



No one
8:44 pm | May 6, 2004
It's a good plot/story but could u please write more instead of that little page and a half.
spectre
2:18 pm | May 6, 2004
Yea, I'd like it a little better if I had incorporated more action. But that's not what this chapter was for. Thanks Main( I copied the code off the comments board, so that was a big help.). And evryone else for reading.
Mainevent
11:09 am | May 6, 2004
To do the page break-****************- type [hr].

And you should italicize the ship name, not embolden it.

Otherwise, it was pretty good. Poor, poor Tashano.
CoLd BlooDed
2:44 am | May 6, 2004
Well done, very well done indeed. Yeah, once you use page breaks ([hr]) you'll be good to go.
SeverianofUrth
10:48 pm | May 5, 2004
I want to see the next one.
SOS.Odin
8:08 pm | May 5, 2004
good job
workin up to be a good fan ficker
D4rj0n7
7:10 pm | May 5, 2004
Great story spectre, i want to see where this goes
Helljumper
6:03 pm | May 5, 2004
yes, yes u did good job son. story was creative and i want to see where this is going. it was a little story.

ODST
spectre
5:06 pm | May 5, 2004
See I used the code this time.


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