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Comments for 'Beta Halo: Call in the Scouts'



Capt. Yossarian
1:39 pm | June 13, 2003
This is obviously a work in progress...but over 17 BILLION Covenant main assault forces?
thats a bit of overkill there. there should be at least a squad of grunts for the jackal fire teams, with elites at the head. and hunters as the heavy assault. reasonable, no? your story starts a bit vague...whats the position on the timeline, which batch of Spartan is 'george' and how the heck did marines with man-portable weapons bring down a covie ship? this story still needs a lot of drafting. work hard, you'll probably put out something pretty damned good
SPARTAN 053
1:59 pm | June 12, 2003
Sorry about this one, I am making a much better remake. It'll not have any flood yet, but it'll involve some polotics and some dead Covies. And oh yeah, trust me, when the Flood are revealed, it'll be with a surprise.
SPARTAN 053
2:31 pm | June 11, 2003
Listen folks, they don't take down the cruiser, it goes down into the hole looking for Halo tech, problem is, it gets somehow overrun by the flood. Don't ask how, they don't do anything. Oh, by the way, two MAC rounds or a simgle Super MAC round is enough to take a cruiser out. It isn't enough to take out a carrier or a super ship from TFoR.
scope
6:20 pm | June 4, 2003
I totaly agree with Kimball on this cuz I read both TFoR and the flood, It just isnt possible
Wiley Kimball
9:41 pm | June 3, 2003
8/10. I don't think a team of Spartans could shoot down a Covie cruiser. In TFoR they nuke it, shoot it several times with a MAC gun, and send hundreds of Archer missles at it and it still dosen't die. It seems highly unlikley that a couple of Spartans with ARs and RLs could bring it down when a nuke, several MAC rounds, and a few hundred Archer missles couldn't, even if it was damadged.
scope
6:21 pm | June 3, 2003
8/10 Another shoot-em-up story, with only Covies get lead and death but with humans never dieing


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