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			some help  
4:18 pm | December 30, 2002 
			the battle may be fast but in writing desciption is key, the longer the better.  you could spend 2 pages on five minuters of the story.
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			ThreadedAce3  
2:55 am | December 30, 2002 
			to fast, and some typos. use more detail and you could have an ok story
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			el_halo_diablo  
6:58 pm | December 26, 2002 
			Ok you coulda explained that story in a little more detail, instead of going a mile a minute.
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