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Comments for 'The Gods of War: Spartan III's: Bombing Run'



romac1991
7:41 am | July 21, 2004
Wait a second, disregard my last comment. You'll have to wait and see.



romac1991
romac1991
11:45 am | July 20, 2004
He was saying negative that the explosion killed him.


romac1991
Dave Luck
6:29 pm | July 19, 2004
Shennanigans? Right.... Right. Cut the spam.

Well, ever since I made the comment about "Doctor Footsie's Toothpaste" I've decided to write with a little more humor, a little more taste. Ah, well, if you want me to cut the crap out, no problem.

Well, I kinda did like the dialogue, but I wonder why John says 'Negative'?

I guess it's got to do with something later on in the story.

- Dave.
CoLd BlooDed
11:31 am | July 18, 2004
I see someone forgot to check the capslock...
mAINEVENT
5:15 pm | July 17, 2004
oH dAVE...

WILL YOUR WILEY SHANANIGANS NEVER CEASE?
!@#$
11:24 am | July 17, 2004
Spartans don't mourn in remembrance at least Master Chief didn't mourn for Grace when she got killed by a brute.
romac1991
11:17 am | July 17, 2004
wow, i really f&cked up, im gonna go and hid in my hole.


romac1991
Dave Luck
12:43 am | July 17, 2004
Actually, the only eulogy John gave Grace was,

"Goodbye, Grace."

Next time the Spartans say their thanks for their meals, their going to say, 'Grace.' Say 'Grace' - Get it?

- Dave.
Ishkabibbl
12:30 am | July 17, 2004
Not all spartans think like the MC. You know..in the, I think, prolouge for TFoR one of the other spartans said something about making the covenant suffer, and it went on to say all that wonderful stuff about the MC just his job, etc, etc.
Jessica
12:25 am | July 17, 2004
But MC was in a battle when she was killed...the battle was over, and the dude gave rememberence, because there was time to...Btw romac, sry about not being able to catch that mistake...my bad...
:(

Jess
Mainevent
8:15 pm | July 16, 2004
Maybe there's two...maybe...?
PHo
5:11 pm | July 16, 2004
"But Joshua just lay there, not moving. Brian checked his vital signs and confirmed it, flatlined. He stood a moment in mourning and remembrance, then quietly said goodbye to his Spartan brother."


uh...but he was still alive in the rest of the chapter?
Jessica
12:25 pm | July 16, 2004
Good Job! ^.^

Probably because of my superb editing...LoL, Jks Jks...^.^, GJ with the story...

Jess


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