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CoLd BlooDed
3:51 pm | November 18, 2003
8.245, I don't think I've seen that number before. Haha. Good story but I agree with Walker, MC is no ordinary soldier, I'll give you just a plain 8.5/10
Walker
1:21 pm | November 18, 2003
You make the MC seem like some grumbling regular soldier, unwilling to go on a mission that wouldn't be his most dangerous yet, by far. But as we saw in TFOR, he and the other Spartans are the first to volunteer. He volunteered to be the first to try on the MJOLNIR armor, right after seeing it crush a man who tried to put it on. Point is, he's brave, and doesn't complain. The writing was so-so, too. 8.245/10.

Semper Fi

-Walker


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