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Comments for 'The Fight for Bravo Base; pt. 1' |
Lord Revan
2:31 pm | September 7, 2003
Excellent work. My only recommendation is to describe the outpost a little more.
If that's coming in your next installment, great. But it adds more to the story to know what kind of defenses are in place and what kind of structures are there (Forerunner buildings, tents, pre-fab buildings... etc.).
Otherwise, great job.
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'Nosolee
1:46 pm | September 7, 2003
9.25/10
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Alpha Lance
5:22 pm | September 6, 2003
New writter, you got story started. (9.4/10)
Alpha Lance
Creator of Halo Trilogy
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shadow stalker
3:47 pm | September 6, 2003
AWESOME STORY!!! THAT KICKED ASS!!!!
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