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Comments for 'The Marines' |
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4:32 am | March 3, 2004
Uh hello... I didnt even read the poem but i read a different one and i though it was ook.
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2:32 pm | February 11, 2004
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Red Loser
6:05 pm | May 4, 2003
Good start. If you wish to write more poetry, the number one thing you need to do is work on meter...that is the lifeblood of good poetry. If you can get that down, then the rest is easy. Rhyme is also good.
And please don't try any free verse gibberish. :)
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Nike (Again)
10:14 am | May 4, 2003
Does anybody know of the poem that Corporal Owens from TRtZ wrote in the prologue? Well, I'm thinking about submitting that. Would that sound good?
(I think that came out wrong)...
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Nike
10:12 am | May 4, 2003
And this is NOT my first poem. "This Battle" is my first poem.
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Nike
10:10 am | May 4, 2003
Okay, first off, Rusty must have been drunk when he wrote that. And everybody knows that drinking gives you hangovers.
I just created this out of boredom, thinking, "Aw what the hell? I'll send it and see what they think."
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monitor101
12:43 am | May 4, 2003
Well written Kinsella keep them coming!
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Berconius
2:24 pm | May 3, 2003
Rusty, wtf...? I like this poem, Rhyme doesn't matter and Fanfiction doesn't need to be DIRECTLY related to the "Halo Storyline", whatever that is. The poem is a great representation of what the marines go through in the Halo Universe.
As for Nike, I'd say that you may want to try to put a form of rythym in you poem. Still good anyway.
10/10
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scope
1:26 pm | May 2, 2003
lol I want to hear more james.
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James Kinsella
1:03 pm | May 2, 2003
Rusty, do you actually have any work posted here? If you don't then you can't talk about how crappy YOU(I stress the you, because you're the only one) think somebody elses writing is. If you actually do have work submitted here than I will concur with scope's assesment of the situation and pronounce you 'high'. Didn't you read that it was his first poem? It may not rhyme, but not all poems do! In fact, some of the most meaningful poems don't rhyme!
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scope
10:26 am | May 2, 2003
Rusty wtf are u smokin if u had half a life you would give the kid a break and read the story more clearly. 10/10 is still my rating.
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Agent Shade
1:26 am | May 2, 2003
easy there Rusty, give this kid a break...could you do any better?
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Rusty Shakalford
12:16 am | May 2, 2003
Ok...this is quite pointless. Yea who cares about the mud and $hit on the Pillar of Autumn, and what the heck was that about the families? I dont think that they ever wrote anything about families in the entire storyline of the "Halo" saga. WHO CARES, THIS IS WORTHLESS!!!!!!!!! 1/10
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scope
10:50 pm | May 1, 2003
10/10
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James Kinsella
9:57 pm | May 1, 2003
Pretty good for your first poem. Keep em coming!
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