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Comments for 'Operation: Stingray Ch. 3: --Survival of the Smartest--'



Nick Kang
12:09 am | April 24, 2004
So then...not attracting many readers this time...

NK
Nick Kang
11:27 am | April 22, 2004
Yeah I really didn't realize that I had put too many hr's until about half a minute after I had submitted it.
CoLd BlooDed
10:33 pm | April 21, 2004
Yeah, a bit too many...

I still liked it, the story is gripping and made me want to read through it, can't wait 'til what happens next.

I suggest you group the paragraphs into bigger segments though. :D
Nick Kang
9:50 pm | April 21, 2004
Does anyone here think I put a bit too many hr's?


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