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Comments for 'Operation: Stingray Ch. 2: --Desperation--'



System Failure
9:45 pm | April 4, 2004
Good story, everything has detail to it. Can't wait to see the next one.
CoLd BlooDed
9:43 pm | April 4, 2004
Very cool, I'm impressed with this one, I thought it was better than the first.

I noticed the amount of detail you put into your stories, and it's the perfect amount too, just enough for you to know what's going on and to paint a picture of the surroundings.

Overall, great job, keep it up.
Nick Kang
3:23 pm | April 3, 2004
Wow thanks, I didn't think it was as good as the first one.
Agent Shade
2:58 pm | April 3, 2004
hey, not bad at all, well explained battle scenes, a little on the short side but hopefully the next will be longer.

i like the idea of bringing in the human navy, first story that i've read with a human sea ship. keep it up


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