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Comments for 'The Clouds Cry -- part 1: Just a Nightmare'



Dispraiser
4:02 am | March 25, 2003
Yeah, you try taht, it's what we've all been complaining about... Better than the other... But still bad...

C-...
-Reasons... Who the hell cares?
nicholas
8:39 pm | March 23, 2003
It's okay... You can tell it's gonna be just like Halo, with the 'little black things', 'insides gone out' and the 'crazy guy found in a corner'. But, hopefully you'll make it more original and less Halo-rewritten, so it could become a promising series.
Steele
12:54 pm | March 19, 2003
Ahhh... I'm not sure what to say. In my opinion, no offense intended, you should maybe do a more through check on military matters. Read Halo: The Fall of Reach if you haven't.
gruntkiller
12:51 pm | March 19, 2003
god are you truly that uninspired just rewriting halo ona a different ring world with another ship. how the hell eould they know what happened to the pillar of autum. John was the only one who escaped halo to tell anything, to little discription, and too little insperation. youre capable of more then this.


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