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Comments for 'Death of the Cheif'



Black Titan
3:07 am | June 19, 2004
Scince you killed the master cheif, i guess you won't write another story. THANK GOD
MASTERC
2:09 am | June 14, 2004
and Yonker, the story sucked- USA USA USA!!!!!
MASTERC
2:06 am | June 14, 2004
Sorry guys, it was my first story and i wrote it late at night. The next one i write will be much better. And I DO love HALO.
Hellhound_89
1:48 am | April 27, 2004
Yonker- How can he write more u asshole he just killed the friggin main character
MASTERC-Get a life, u r a nerd who disgraces the name nerd. u are an asshole. go bum ur little boyfriend Yonker and whilst u are suckin his NUTS Think about maybe THAT YOU SUCK SHIT FUCKER!!!!!!!!!!!
-da Hound
dum da dum
9:07 am | April 26, 2004
Yonker is a cockbite
Slayer Boi
9:03 am | April 26, 2004
Hmmmmmm
THAT WAS THE MOST FUCKED UP THING I HAVE EVER READ!!!
Ok that aside, u r gay, ur writing style is gay. the only thing straight about u is that u can't get laid!!!!!!
on a scale of 1 2 10, 1 being good, u would be at about, 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000
U R A FAGGOT!!!!
yonker
10:12 am | April 25, 2004
i loved your story it was absolutely fantastic. you should write more for me to enjoy, even if those other stupid heartless bastards say its bad. it was marvellous! go england!
Connie
9:57 am | April 21, 2004
Whoever wrote this story deserves to be strung up and shot.
Tazz
9:57 am | April 21, 2004
That was the shittest story ever written. You didn't even describe the fighting scenes at all. I have had more fun showering in liquified dog shit than reading this crap that I am forced to call a story. I agree with Connie's comments.
Connie
9:57 am | April 21, 2004
My advice: End your life instead of wasting mine.
Dark-NiTe
10:30 pm | April 13, 2004
Bad
Nick Kang
4:35 pm | April 12, 2004
There will be a second Halo in H2. On IGN.com they said that there were 24 levles. 16 on Earth, 2 on the moon, and 6 on the new Halo. But while I'm here, I'll comment once again on thew horribleness of this story.

It sucked

okay, that's it for me. Cya.
Connie
11:49 am | April 12, 2004
OH GEE!!!!
I'V NEVER HEARD OF SOMEONE DODGING FRIGGIN' BULLETS BEFORE

(caugh) MATRIX RIP-OFF!
Connie
11:44 am | April 12, 2004
Six Words: What The Fuck Were You Thinking?
I mean, come on, shouldn't the Chief have died a more heroic death than just drink-driving a Pelican into a friggin' cliff?

3/10 from me
Grey fox
11:00 am | April 12, 2004
But just for the sad and puzzling ending im upgrading ur rating to: 3.999/10 :\\


PS: u c im not soooo bad after all
CoLd BlooDed
2:09 am | April 12, 2004
Maybe you should've spelled "Chief" right in the title. But you know, don't take my word for it.
Grey fox
10:48 pm | April 11, 2004
ok first of all what second Halo? Halo 2 (KICK ASS!!!) takes place in Earth City, and i think a moon base or something like that. In order for Earth to survive and for the human race to thrive is for the Covenant to be destroyed or John 117, who is really a lawer wakes up one night with sweat trickling down his forehead. He eases himself out of bed and gets a drink. Then he quietly says to himself, "it was only a dream". But if that was so i would cry for months and lock myself in my room. My life would have been for nothing.
Grey fox
10:48 pm | April 11, 2004
Have u even beaten Halo more or less played it?
Grey fox
10:44 pm | April 11, 2004
Halo doesn't have a MOTHERFUCKING CORE, and if u went near it ud be T O A S T
Grey fox
10:35 pm | April 11, 2004
Oh great, now he and his Battle rifle clip(with about 30-40 rounds) just slaughtered 100 Grunts and dozens of Elites, Jackals, and Hunters. I mean christ they would have to be humping each other to fit everybody in the hallway. or the hallway would have to be LONG. but i truly am sorry for the harsh critisism. 0.125/10
Grey fox
10:30 pm | April 11, 2004
Oh yay what a coincidence, Cortana gave the Chief's ass a steroid and now hes all fucked up and dodging fucking plasma bolts and shit like that, its a MOTHERFUCKING HALLWAY!
Grey fox
10:28 pm | April 11, 2004
Plasma grenades raining from the sky? its a MOTHERFUCKING HALLWAY!!!!!!!!!!
Grey fox
10:24 pm | April 11, 2004
How could Grunts flank the Chief in a MOTHERFUCKING HALLWAY!!!!!!?????
Grey fox
10:23 pm | April 11, 2004
I can tell by just reading three sentances that Helljumper is going to be disappointed, but i'll keep reading.
The Razor
4:26 pm | April 11, 2004
Me to. You sold maybe think of a poem in place.


2/10 :\\
Helljumper
10:19 pm | April 10, 2004
it was pretty bad
Wiley
1:08 pm | April 10, 2004
how would all those troops fit into one hallway?


Yea...it was bad.

4/10
Nick Kang
11:22 am | April 10, 2004
That was kinda dumb.
A hundred Grunts? Even the real Master Chief wouldn't survive a hundred Grunts, along with those Elites and Hunters.
Dean
10:57 am | April 10, 2004
that was the gayest story i ever heard


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