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Comments for 'Major Mc Lenn'



GUY
10:26 pm | September 28, 2003
WHAT THE SHIT WAS THAT? IT LOOKED LIKE IT CAME OUT OF A DECEASED BABOON'S ASS! Aside from taht ranting,PLEASE USE SOME GRAMMAR!
Sergeant B
6:07 pm | September 28, 2003
What the hell?
Alpha Lance
2:54 pm | September 28, 2003
Yup, got some grammer mistakes, and spelling. You misspelled spray, you wrote spay. But still, this was a good story.
Mainevent
4:37 pm | September 27, 2003
132,131 ships eh?

That's a pretty big army......
Dispraiser
12:12 am | September 27, 2003
I SAID TO USE GRAMMAR! Dammit, generally for each post you try to put one beautiful borderline poetic paragraph that at least makes proper use of commas! Sorry, but grammar is something you have to know and understand, assuming that english is your native language. Everyone should at least know how to speak their own language, and yes, a proper orator should know about not only speaking, but also story telling and writing.


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