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Comments for 'Sarges Platoon, Chapter 3: Heaven, Hell, and all that's in between'



harley
4:47 am | February 10, 2003
You do got a real good story going here. I'm reading too much my heads going to explode. but anyways yeah real good story
Bob
8:39 pm | January 22, 2003
lol
Hikaru-119
11:06 pm | January 19, 2003
Okay kick ass. Kick lots of ass...
Bobby Lucas
6:15 am | January 19, 2003
Ok! I just thought of a great twist... Part 4 will kick some serious ass!
Hikaru-119
12:15 pm | January 18, 2003
Monitor101 the hunt is mine. Yet I do need a few good shots in reality and in Halo to join my sniper squad...
Oh yeah Bob Lucas throw in some whacked out things that you'd never expect. New races, involve God as I am in my Halo theory, big huge battle(and I mean big!), serious betrayals, and stuff like that.
Bob Lucas
9:11 pm | January 14, 2003
Thanks! Anyone have any ideas for part 4? I'm fresh out of ideas...
moniter101
2:26 am | January 13, 2003
the story was awasome fuck im gonna kill that anonymous faget.
someguY
10:21 pm | January 12, 2003
again exellent
Bob Lucas
8:44 pm | January 12, 2003
I need to think of the second half of the forerunner's story before I can make the next chapter...so don't expect another one for a long time...
Bob Lucas
8:30 pm | January 12, 2003
(Not you Hikaru)
Hikaru-119
8:15 pm | January 12, 2003
Anonymous learn to keep your comments to yourself or give some real advice for this author and all others. Moderately good story, sections seemed too short, and now go work on the end of your short story.
Bob Lucas
8:14 pm | January 12, 2003
Stop being an @$$!!! Why the hell are writing that shit?!?!?!
Anonymous
8:14 pm | January 12, 2003
God...I've seen worse!
Anonymous
6:45 pm | January 12, 2003
TOO MANY WORDS!!!!
Anonymous
4:52 pm | January 12, 2003
What do you mean It used too many words?
Anonymous
2:55 pm | January 12, 2003
Your story sucked...

It used too many words...
Anonymous
2:55 pm | January 12, 2003
Your story sucked...

It used too many words...
Anonymous
2:55 pm | January 12, 2003
Your story sucked...

It used too many words...


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