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Comments for 'Omega Red Chapter 1'



janglurevil7
11:53 pm | February 1, 2003
way 2 much like FoR. Really closely walking the line of plagerism here. REALLY CLOSE. I'd advise that you re-work this.
ssjbrk
2:06 am | December 20, 2002
borderline plaigarism with your youth training camp, using nylund's stuff aint cool.
Dispraiser
8:41 pm | December 19, 2002
The begining is too summaryish... I like to leave a delicate history in my fan fics that gets dragged out alter. I didn't do so as much in my first one though... But I don't really like to mess with spartans too much either, but I am doing that too... Nice job though.
freeon
9:49 pm | December 18, 2002
i take back what i said about chapter 2
i meant chapter 1


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