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Comments for 'Assault Part 2: Into the fire'



Thomas Harper
1:02 am | March 24, 2004
it was ok...one thing i have to point out is this:

watch ur grammar!!!! that was one major thing that sorta killed ur story a little bit. also watch ur formating, try to indent before each new paragraph.

keep it up though.


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