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Comments for 'Final Fate: Mankind's Demise' |
When in doubt, kill Everything.
12:38 pm | November 13, 2003
That's my motto.
-Mainevent
"Retreat, Hell we just got here."
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Jink
12:18 pm | November 13, 2003
Yeah, I felt like going on about it would really drag it to far. I mean, okay, the world ended. Yeah, but let's make sure we get our point across. I mean, REALLY push it to the point where it makes people giggle.
Jeez. Well, this wasn't my best (I'm not very experienced at short stories, this is my second, I think.) However, this is only the first of an entire series of short stories. Final Fate II is being written.
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Alpha Lance
12:11 pm | November 12, 2003
THis was great. And Jared, you need to read other people stories. But this is great Jink, no complaints from me.
Alpha Lance
God bless America.
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Walker
4:27 am | November 12, 2003
It's okay. It's not like it's a completely in-depth, complex line that takes work to make one similar to it. It's just a simple statement, like yours.
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Jink
2:44 am | November 12, 2003
About that last line, Walker...
I was trying to just end the story simply without describing the end of the world in heavy detail. I couldn't think of anything else to put, so I just went with simplicity. Sorry about that.
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Walker
11:10 pm | November 11, 2003
Oh my gosh! What is it with these n00bs? The first fanfic they see, and "ooh, it's my favorite! the best fanfic eva!" Please, what would Leonard Maltin be worth if he groveled at the feet of every producer?
This was a pretty good one, though. 9/10.
Semper Fi
-Walker
PS: That last line sounded a lot like the last line of my "A New Masada"...
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Jared
5:30 pm | November 11, 2003
Wow that was a great story i liked it the most of all the fanFic . I liked the whole love story that was implemented . And i liked how we lost because we never loose it was a nice turn of events . That was a nice story i hope he writes more . Great work author .
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