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 Comments for 'Earths Fall? Prt: 2- The Assault' |  
 
 
		
			| Mind_Affecting_Parasite 4:57 pm | February 27, 2004
 I'm afraid I'll have to agree.  You need to practice a little more before you post again.  I always have my friends read mine before I post it here, although I don't listen to what they say about it untill its on HBO.  Try it!
 
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			| CoLd BlooDed 2:53 am | February 27, 2004
 No, but it really did suck, I'm sorry, but it did.  Writing just isn't for you if you can go by three chapters in ten paragraphs.
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			| Anonymous 8:39 pm | February 26, 2004
 Helljumper and i might seem harsh and i have to admit i was yesterday, so just take your time and i am sure we will get off your back next time
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			| CoLd BlooDed 12:15 pm | February 26, 2004
 How does three chapters go by in ten paragraphs?  Get better...please.
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			| BlackGhost 3:47 am | February 26, 2004
 That was crap.
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			| Helljumper 2:26 am | February 26, 2004
 Please stop writing u suck, lieutenants commanding divisons and majors saying yes sir to lietenants, oh boy, wtf
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			| Phalanx3580 2:06 am | February 26, 2004
 cousin is right "lutenant" really turned me off, no really i am off!
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			| MC's Cousin 5:46 pm | February 25, 2004
 Even though I was lacking of time I decided to read this but decided to stop after you misspelled "lutenant".  Sorry, but no.
 
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