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Comments for 'Angels war'



javier fernandez-vina
10:06 pm | October 16, 2003
The covies already foud earth in my fic, what there searching for now will pop up later.I can't just reveal everything in the first stage.
Walker
8:49 pm | October 16, 2003
Think about it: What are the Covies always trying to find? The location of Earth. How do they get that? Military databases, both shipboard and ground-based. How do they get to those databases? Boarding ships and invading bases, rather than blowing them out of the sky. Think about it.
javier fernandez-vina
6:23 pm | October 16, 2003
Sorry Wiley. Im from Cuba, live in miami, Florida and attend Killian high.
Ishkabibbl
11:00 am | October 16, 2003
Good 'ole VA, but besides grammer and what not, you might want to try italics and indenting and stuff of the like.
Sarge
12:03 am | October 16, 2003
How about explaining why the Covenant board things... Covenant tend to act like pirates and board things rather than just use their super weapons and blow stuff up... Perhaps one of the two chars could have some special something the Covenant want or something like that. Keep it up dude.
wiley
7:28 pm | October 15, 2003
You wouldn't happen to live in Fredericksburg, VA, would you? 'Caus I Know a Javier who likes anime and halo, and lives in F'burg Just wonderin'.
oh, and 9/10
iceindeath
12:52 pm | October 15, 2003
you know i never read halo before but DAMN!!!! This shit is good. hurry up and finish the next chapter.
yours truly,
the neighborhood Butch.
javier fernandez-vina
12:43 pm | October 15, 2003
This is my first fanfic so go easy on it.Oh and the blue-green hair thing, that's couse im a anime fan.


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