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Comments for 'Part 2: Retaliation'



Jagged
11:42 pm | March 8, 2004
I don't know this "Formatting".....
Thomas Harper
8:44 pm | March 7, 2004
try to concetrate on ur format*** oops.
Thomas Harper
8:37 pm | March 7, 2004
nice vocab but [WARNING:this may sound like im repeating JJiggssaw] try to concetrate more on ur vocab. i still like it though. =:)
CoLd BlooDed
5:37 am | March 7, 2004
First thing I suggest:

Read the books, they double the accuracy of stories, etc.
Jagged
3:24 am | March 7, 2004
M.C. is a soldier yes, but i haven't read the books, so i assumed he was also a trained as a strategist....i'll take that into account next time.
Helljumper
5:08 pm | March 6, 2004
first of all, the MC is a soldier and does ground combat, he wouldn't not be giving battle strageies in combat to naval officers. thats all i gotta say, i didn't finnish.
JJiggssaw
11:57 pm | March 5, 2004
Heres a comment. It was great. Really good. Pay more attention to formatting.
Jagged
10:52 pm | March 5, 2004
no comments, I'm shocked...


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