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Comments for 'The Life of a Soldier' |
alex
1:32 am | June 30, 2004
Halo is the best game ever Icant wat for Halo2 to come out good job thanks for a great game.
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HaloMaster7
11:30 pm | January 18, 2003
hey people thanks for the comments. thanks a lot Dispraiser. i agree with you.
--Air
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Dispraiser
5:28 am | January 7, 2003
It is good to see that someone still know about speech. Most fanfics are all just blood and guts flying everywhere while yours has *gasp* a story! Though it is a little thin, and generic, so was my first one. I was, however, also thinking that the marine would know the name of the enemy weapons and names! I was relieved though that you didn't make your Main Character into a superhero. He is a real person, with fear. Most stories, apparently, though in the game they cannot kill even a grunt most the time, can storm into the room guns blazing and kill everything, taking no wounds at all. Also, I am glad to see that you didn't make an idiot of yourself. I am pissed off when people go and write stories about MC. Usually they are bad. These people have no imagination, and most begin with MC finding a new planet with more Spartans, then they go to the covie homeworld and, well, the story sucks. I am glad you didn't do that... But in the second part, make sure that whenever you type anything at all, you can think of a reason. Everything. No meaningless things at all besides if you want to insert a friendship.
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HaloMaster7
12:36 pm | January 5, 2003
hey thanks for the good comments. i really appreciate it. i will add more action for part two.
--Air
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gruntkiller
1:11 am | January 5, 2003
it was pretty good the story seemed a little thin and there were a couple of spelling mistakes but other then that pretty good
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Knightmare(MM
9:36 am | January 4, 2003
Nice job.
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freon
8:24 pm | January 3, 2003
this was a really good story
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Pilot 415
8:17 pm | January 3, 2003
you need more action, and detail like how bryan got captured and stuff like that
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