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Comments for 'Cahpter 2: Gayap's Story' |
AlphaBravo343
10:48 pm | April 30, 2003
Ah, I see. Well, keep it up, just add flavor to the names.
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HaloFREAK
5:45 pm | April 30, 2003
im trying to make a mix between halo and aliens. i guess you can tell.anyway, the parts with Gayap are mainly just to tell you what heppened to... something that will come up in the future.
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HaloFREAK
11:31 am | April 30, 2003
no, not a super grunt. he just was lucky he didnt get shot.
I AM THE GRUNTINATOR. COME WITH ME IF YOU WANT TO LIVE.
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AlphaBravo343
2:29 am | April 30, 2003
Hmm, the names reminded me of some of the names in other movies and books. Borrowing ideas is cool, but borrowing names or parts of names isn't sometimes. Otherwise, good story context and storyline. 8/10
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Steele
10:51 am | April 29, 2003
8/10, Keep it up.
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Shadow Spartan
12:03 am | April 29, 2003
lol, this was a pretty good story...yeah, keep them coming, 8/10
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Anonymous
10:51 pm | April 28, 2003
Cool! the adventures or super grunt!
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HaloFREAK
10:19 pm | April 28, 2003
thanks for reading my story. Ill try to remember to indent more often too. i dont know how I forgot to fix "cahpter" to chapter.
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James Kinsella
6:48 pm | April 28, 2003
Pretty good story, I hope that you keep them coming. Just a suggestion, [indent]. Thanx.
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