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Comments for 'Shadows'



Donte
2:13 am | June 26, 2003
Damn fine story, but there were a lot of mistakes in your grammer. You could have a serious future in writing.
Wiley Kimball
9:09 pm | June 2, 2003
You didn't spell "damn" right ;)
Red
6:45 pm | June 2, 2003
Some of your words are used wrong. Dilipidated, for example is a higher vocabulary word I suppose, and it was used wrong. This means one of two things, a.) You made an honest mistake, which is okay, it is almost right. b.) You have word and right clicked the word that you had to trade it out for something that sounded cool. Careful...
scope
1:44 pm | June 2, 2003
8/10 DAM u kimball stop taking my complaints
Wiley Kimball
10:24 pm | June 1, 2003
Good, just capitalize Cheif, Covanent, and Elite.
8/10


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