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Comments for 'Halo 2: The Fall of New Tokyo Chapter 1/1' |
A Fan
4:51 am | June 26, 2004
what Mainevent said ^____^ update soon *____*
but maybe I should read Sterfrye36's story I don't know what the ''the code '' is ^___^
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white grunt
9:30 pm | June 3, 2004
it was ok.hey mainevent do u play Gunbound?
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Nick Kang
10:19 am | June 2, 2004
Also, if you read Sterfrye's story, it'll make you feel good, becuase it points out the worst story in HBO history(I'm not saying that this story is bad).
NK
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russ687
3:43 am | June 2, 2004
Read the books, this should give you a better idea of how a Spartan acts (at least how John-117 acts). If you're going to write about an already designed and popular character, you need to build off of what the designers already created. If you want a Spartan to have the atrributes seen in your story, you need to create a brand new Spartan somehow. But do not try to change an already composed character.
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Mainevent
12:29 am | May 31, 2004
No problem buddy. Good attitude.
We're just pointing out the flaws so that you can improve on them. Nothing harsh here.
Use the code- if you don't know what it is, read Sterfrye's story like Nick suggested, and it'll be explained.
Otherwise, not a big deal. Everyone has to start sometime. And I've seen a lot worse from people. Keep it up, you'll get better.
Anyone who sticks around, takes the good advice, and keeps on trying to improve does.
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gamingacE419
9:27 pm | May 30, 2004
All right, maybe I have gone wrong in some areas (maybe all of them). This is my first fan fic on this site and now from your views, i'll try to amend things in the second part.
Thanks for your comments. I really appreciate them
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gamingacE419
9:27 pm | May 30, 2004
Right, okay I may have been going astray ( like a million miles astray) with character personality nad other things.
Please note, that this is my first time here posting a fan fic. Obivously, i didn't meet to yours or others expectations for a good story. But nethertheless I'll try to make amends to the second part based on your ideas.
Thanks for your comments. I really appreciate them.
Not all stories are great. Please keep this in mind. :)
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Mainevent
8:24 pm | May 30, 2004
Why would an MCPO be taking orders from a under-ranked Sergeant?
A Spartan is as good as, if not better than the group of marines assigned to him; they'd probably have sent him in alone.
No code.
The tone was kinda off.
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Nick Kang
4:33 pm | May 30, 2004
The Chief is pretty relaxed, but he doesn't crack jokes very much. You gotta use the code. Read Fan Fiction for Idiots by Sterfrye36, lower on this update page, to find out how.
NK
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Marcus Garvey
1:39 pm | May 30, 2004
Man, the Chief is not sarcastic, condescending or relaxed in his view to his duty, you got his character all wrong!
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