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The Collector
8:53 pm | March 5, 2004
DDDaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnn HMPH TSK TSK TSK Damn!
MetalGhost
8:21 am | March 5, 2004
it may be feedback, but 80% of it is saying its shit, even if your story's dont generate that much feedback, if its good feedback who gives a crap
Sterfrye36
3:36 am | March 5, 2004
Anytime. And why do my stories never generate this much feedback? Mainevent, Walker, Agent Shade and SOS Odin are about the only ones who read my stuff!

*Psst! Kids, that's a message that the next story of Sterfrye36's tha comes out, you need to read!*
ToFu
6:49 pm | March 4, 2004
lol it wasnt ur story Sterfrye36? I just thought it was because u were saying:

"Heh. I get why the grammer was so bad. That's the style, guys. Think about it: If a game has a line that reads "All your base are belong to us" why wouldn't it have a line like "The attributed duties you get are not presumptions to serve the necessities, soldier."

I thought only the authour would do that, supporting his own story...sorry
JJiggssaw
5:14 pm | March 4, 2004
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm interesting enough not to through read whole way. Clever not so think I. Acnowlodge I though do, think I that funny not so. Harder try.
Jon M
4:38 am | March 4, 2004
Nobody recognizes genius in its time.
Sterfrye36
1:43 am | March 4, 2004
Wha-?? This isn't my story!
ToFu
10:59 pm | March 3, 2004
Ok guys lets take it easy on this guy, hes new so calm down ur comments...I think its my fault, when i wrote: Your Fan-Fic sounds like a foreigner struggling to tell a story. I apologize...but Sterfrye36 ur story is still strange
Whoever
10:23 pm | March 3, 2004
Personally where the **** did you learn english. Second of all why is it that marines in Spartan armor are killing each other. Holographic sims i guess.

Besides the mixed stroy line 3/5
Jenkins
6:18 pm | March 3, 2004
Holy Mother of Halo. Funny... ...that's about it. The content was about as exciting as sitting in a shade with nothing to blast! I give it half a thumbs up. Hey where's the other half of my thumb!?

Dammit_Jenkins_Fire_Your_Weapon!!!
Thoams Harper
1:52 pm | March 3, 2004
........................huh?
Mann Da
12:51 pm | March 3, 2004
Good story be it is. Fits becoming well story for context. Red vs Blue in tale funny. All Your Base Are Belong To Us funny also. No you get idea speak what I, http://www.planettribes.com/allyourbase/video3.shtml
visit must. It set you up the bomb.
Solidus Snake
12:29 pm | March 3, 2004
Where the hell are you from?
BBT
8:55 am | March 3, 2004
hilarious.
good to see someone who knows their grammar too.
nice job :-)
GLADIATRRR3000
4:07 am | March 3, 2004
all you base... base... base...
all your base... are belong to us...
i remember that!
Yoda's Ghost
2:06 am | March 3, 2004
What say you shit this is?

Talk very well these people do. You seek Yoda.

HmmmMMMmmm?

Learn to speak english before post you should.
CoLd BlooDed
1:25 am | March 3, 2004
Hope mine weren't some of the "sparse bad stories" 'Nosolee. :P
CoLd BlooDed
1:25 am | March 3, 2004
There, I read it, and by read, I mean laugh, and by it, I mean first paragraph.

It's Shakespeare! He's made a return!

But seriously, this wasn't a w00t, but a woot. (not a good thing)
Alias (Nick Kang)
11:33 pm | March 2, 2004
OMG. That DOES sound lika foreigner trying to tell a story. I mean,

"I more do not have the patience for it for much time." ?

You need to take some 2nd grade english lessons.
'Nosolee
11:30 pm | March 2, 2004
Waits..are you supposed to be writing like its 'All Your Base are Belong to Us'? That's what it reads like.
'Nosolee
11:24 pm | March 2, 2004
Yeah, back in the day...good fan-fics were plentyful and bad ones were sparse. Looks like its visa versa.

I do, however, enjoy the RvB style writing. If you patch up the foreigner crapola and add a bit to the story, you could get a decent pice of work.
Sterfrye36
11:24 pm | March 2, 2004
Heh. I get why the grammer was so bad. That's the style, guys. Think about it: If a game has a line that reads "All your base are belong to us" why wouldn't it have a line like "The attributed duties you get are not presumptions to serve the necessities, soldier."

It's meant as comedy. You really have to have played the game, I suppose.
Wiley K.
11:17 pm | March 2, 2004
Wow, i leave for a few months and look what happens...

Louis has been slacking with the restrictions. When I was here all of last year stuff like this wouldnt even get near the fan fiction site. C'mon Lousis, i know you're busy...but still...you have to read this stuff before you post it...don't you?

this getting award prestigious 0/10
ToFu
11:05 pm | March 2, 2004
Your Fan-Fic sounds like a foreigner struggling to tell a story. Wow, wow, wow....:|
'Nosolee
10:03 pm | March 2, 2004
Someone set us up the bomb.

We get signal.

How are you gentlemen, all your base are belong to us...
Mainevent
9:09 pm | March 2, 2004
This sucked abosutely not piece good shit horse.

Your story made that much sense to me.


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