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Comments for 'HALO: Combat Evolved - Chapter 2: I Love This Job'



Knightmare(MM
8:28 pm | November 26, 2002
I'm an asshole
masterchief15
7:30 pm | November 26, 2002
I didm't really like it. It was very hard to tell where you were at doing the story. You added too many things. I for one think it is better to hear how another person would think the Chief would do the levels and what he would say.
The sword of the admiral
12:42 pm | November 26, 2002
I was waiting for another piece, good job!
Anonymous
11:33 pm | November 25, 2002
AI HITLER
Anonymous
11:33 pm | November 25, 2002
CATUZ CATUZ
Knightmare(MM
10:59 pm | November 25, 2002
Shit for die will you no! huh?

Alright seriously, what IS that?
Sephiroth
10:57 pm | November 25, 2002
Excellent transformation of the 2nd level into writing. It had all the dialogue and scenes of the game plus a few extra tidbits. It isn't very interesting, however, because you know what is going to happen. Try to alter the storyline a little more.


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