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Comments for 'The Chronicle of Squad Omega: Chapter II'



Thomas Harper
11:50 pm | March 21, 2004
o my bad i read it again and saw what Snake Solid 117 was talking about.
Thomas Harper
11:41 pm | March 21, 2004
it was ok. im also waiting for the next one. but before i stat waiting.... like Nick Kang said, what was with the weakened spartans walking 2/3 of a mile when there was a warthog next to them?
Snake Solid 117
7:11 pm | March 10, 2004
To Nick Kang: They probably couldn't in their weakened state. The Worthog does weight over a ton. They couldn't have righted it if they wanted to.

I liked it. It is quite a maricle that they could all walk, but still, it was good. I assume there will be another chapter and I will be waiting.

Note: Even if they were injured, they would prabably send in an extraction team. In this war politics don't really play a role. I'm relating to "Behind Enemy Lines". There that had to worry about political reprocutions, here they don't.

Anyways, good story again and waiting for another...yup...still waiting.
Nick Kang
6:31 pm | March 10, 2004
Good Detail. It was pretty good too. Although you should note if or if ot the Warthog was dead, because the fact that the three of them walking 2/3 of a mile in their severely weakened state while a Wartog was sitting right next to them brought up some questions in my head.


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