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Comments for 'Kelly-087: Prologue' |
a stranger
1:03 am | December 30, 2002
The Spartans were eight when they started training
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Vero
8:28 pm | December 5, 2002
Nice story. Keep up the series. I liked the part about the ruler. That was pretty good.
Oh yea, hey Jaywit, when are you going to post your other titans story HMMMMM??????
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saturn
6:36 am | December 4, 2002
lets get along. everyone has opinions. who knows, maybe the saturians will join the battle in HALO 2. now that would be great.
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Jaywhit10
5:28 am | December 2, 2002
Dude your not the first one with that theory, tons of people have thought of that and that could be a possiblitly. This is an interesting story as i said before and its going to go places unless u can find some way to screw it all up, thank you for ur time and my next series will be out when i GET A NEW FREAKING COMP
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someguY
3:49 am | December 2, 2002
hey i got a therie that in halo 2 there could b old spartans back because not all spartans were recalled to reach
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Gasmask
6:02 pm | December 1, 2002
Not too bad. Kinda low on action, but I hope that is remidied in future stories.
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saturn
11:59 pm | November 30, 2002
ya. the psychology of a 5 or 6 year old. where are the parents? didnt her mom say "dont talk to strangers or UNSC propagandists or recruiters"?!
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Sarge
11:44 pm | November 30, 2002
I like the military letter type font adn the story of course.
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Havok
4:09 am | November 30, 2002
i like the story. im glad someone chose to write something related to my Indoctrination entry. you should continue this one for sure, since i proble wont get around to mine for a while.
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spartan415 (MM
2:01 am | November 30, 2002
i'm back...havn't been here for a time. Well, what i have to say is she cannot be that smart for a five or six year old. It's kinda weird and not very probable.
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Colonel Miltie
1:36 am | November 30, 2002
If you're new to this, welcome. This is a very interesting story.
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saturn
10:27 pm | November 29, 2002
ooo, very very nice. i like how u replace john117 with kelly, metioning the handshake thing too. good. jus a few things, i found it awkward...the transition from winning the race and a cheering crowd to a desolate scene with two strangers. maybe a little descriptions to beautify. oterwise good choice for a series.
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Jaywhit10
8:48 pm | November 29, 2002
Nice story but i have one comment, the amiptheater is below the ground hundreds of feet down. Thats all i wanted to say and interesting idea for this type of story
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someguY
8:19 pm | November 29, 2002
the project ,at first was called spartan not spartan2
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Neco Divad
6:18 pm | November 29, 2002
Very nice. I don't know what to say, I've read a lot of stories today. I can't think of and complaints or faults, and therefore I like it.
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