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Comments for 'Oh Thirteen Part 1' |
Wavehawk
6:07 am | May 3, 2004
Don't you get it? Halo blew up just as Jonah came within effective range...
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Flu
10:53 pm | March 28, 2004
He's too busy trying to work this into a cartoon. I can see it now...I'm just not sure I WANT to.
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'Nosolee
11:15 am | March 28, 2004
That would really suck for Chiefie if he lost his drive...then he'd be "Almost a man". Sarg. Johnson
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CoLd BlooDed
5:27 am | March 28, 2004
Good, Stuntmutt! Good! But how come you don't reply to your stories? :P
I'll be reading the others. . .
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Sentinel
4:38 pm | March 27, 2004
I guess it's alright.
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Jilly
4:30 pm | March 27, 2004
I got it ;)
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Anonymous
4:52 am | March 27, 2004
It says that their drive was suppressed, not completely lost ;)
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Agent Shade
8:35 pm | March 26, 2004
Interesting concept, but im so confused...first an elite, then jonah, then a grunt, now back to jonah...oh well, i'll read the others...
by the way, i just wanted to point out that when you first introduced us to Jonah and Bean, you mentioned at how Jonah thought she was extremely beautiful and "hot." you should keep in mind that when spartans underwent their augmentation, they lost their "sex drive." says this in fall of reach...not really a complaint, just wanted to point it out to you...also, consider indenting every paragraph, makes it a little easier to read.
you have the writing of a professional author regardless, can't wait to read the rest
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Helljumper
4:50 pm | March 26, 2004
I just don't now how Jonah fits in wtih the whole Halo story line.
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Flu
4:32 pm | March 26, 2004
Writing suits you. It's hard to believe you produce groan-inducing three panel comics all week and then...BAM...out of nowhere comes some really decent fiction. You're like a...a...renaissance mutt...er...man.
Nice work.
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some guy
3:36 pm | March 26, 2004
it keep me interested the whole time. very well
done. For a second I thought I was reading a halo
novel.
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