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Comments for 'Redesignation 1of 2'



gamer02
9:00 pm | March 2, 2004
Stuntmutt, you are a genius.
Brockocoli
5:33 pm | February 6, 2004
Pretty good....Funny too. You dont get a lot of that. Transitions were a little rough but that's ok. Next one should be good...
El Stupido
9:47 pm | February 4, 2004
Very good piece of art. I was laughing sohard that my nieghbors downstairs came up and told me to shut up.
Jillybean
2:39 pm | February 4, 2004
I promised myself I'd be analytical in my review, but I have to say I enjoyed it too much to pick it apart.
Okay, here's my attempt. Basic plot, carried off with style, which is the high standard I expect. You didn't tire Jonathon out by overstressing his stupidity, instead you used other ways to do it. I particularly liked 'are we getting hit less?'
Good flow, characterisation and description, I would say the little scene with the capture the flag scenario threw me a wee bit, but once I guessed it was a memory I enjoyed it.

Okies - off to read the next one, where I will continue this - congrats, I like it a lot :D
Slimby
5:46 am | February 4, 2004
I find this to be both funny and harmful to my mothers laptop. Harmful because it fell on the floor. I think near the end it was laughing too...
Wavehawk
5:19 am | February 4, 2004
...I was laughing so hard that I pressed the Reset button by mistake after making a VERY long comment to Stuntmutt. Damn you, 012! :p

Anyway, Stuntmutt is the Douglas Adams of HBO.
Red Loser
2:53 am | February 4, 2004
"Enthralling...Stuntmutt is a master storyteller!"

-New York Times
'Nosolee
2:06 am | February 4, 2004
Very good, and funny. Good to see a FUNNY comedy aroound the fanfiction section. Just some minor gramatical errors here and there and use [indent] for new paragraphs and such. Otherwise, very good.
CoLd BlooDed
1:11 am | February 4, 2004
Good stuff, lol, going to read the next one...

Never thought I'd say this to Stuntmutt...do you know what the code is?

And when I send in comics, do I send them to you or to halo@bungie.org?
Lt Devon
10:34 pm | February 3, 2004
Lol
Scrawl
9:51 pm | February 3, 2004
Wow, this is hilarious! Lol


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