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Comments for 'The Lost Spartan (Chapter 5)' |
IceCreamMan
8:09 pm | July 7, 2002
Blade's right.
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Archangels Blade
11:24 am | June 19, 2002
once again, you have a point. A quantam vortex could land him anywhere, anytime. I guess we'll never know what really happened (not that it matters anymore, as the series is way past that point).
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Jaywhit10
11:47 am | June 18, 2002
Well maybe that or you could of ended 3000 years in the past. So just say something next time that descibed what happened.
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Archangels Blade
11:40 am | June 16, 2002
You have a point.... Maybe Sam's pod got caught in a quantam vortex of some kind (ideas, ideas...). Hey, it could work, as slipstream IS highly unstable.
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Jaywhit10
6:16 pm | June 15, 2002
No big problems with this except for grammer. You need good grammer to make this story even better. Nice story though, but theres one thing i need to know. How did the time line go so fast between when Sam was lost and the time you are doing now. It was about 32 years after Sam was lost that Reach fell.
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Archangels Blade
5:45 pm | June 15, 2002
No mistakes that i could really see. It's a little hard to understand because you rush some parts, however. It's good though.
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Spartan415
9:00 pm | June 14, 2002
mistake*
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Spartan415
8:58 pm | June 14, 2002
I reviewed my story and found no mistakes. If you found a mistike write it here so I can see it.
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Archangels Blade
2:45 pm | June 14, 2002
Not bad, but could use a bit more work on grammar. Just a bit more. Other than that, it looks good! Get that next part out soon!
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