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Comments for 'Halo 2: A New Hope, Part 3'



NightHawlk
1:48 am | December 3, 2002
I liked it
Sephiroth
3:47 am | November 28, 2002
Don't worry, the first three chapters were setting up the plot. From here on out, there will be tons of action. Part 4, which I sent a few hours ago, is a massive space battle between the humans and Covenant.
Sarge
2:33 am | November 28, 2002
It is but the third chapter me friend. All can not be non stop action without a plot now can it.
John Tabat
10:39 pm | November 27, 2002
hey this is cool. by the way, I wrote TOUCHDOWN. This seems to need just a tiny bit more action.
Visitor
2:28 am | November 27, 2002
Hey, I really liked it, keep it up.
Knightmare(MM
10:39 pm | November 25, 2002
I liked how you said "A covenant Fleet is ap-

proaching earth!" Thats honestly one of the only parts I liked. I feel myself though, Spartans are sort of over-used by now. Seen too much of them, maybe?

The slipspace thing... I've seen that too. And will likely see it many more times. Next on the agenda, the chief and that bloody longsword, denting the dash. Nice touch with it. Hmm... I enjoyed the story but it didn't have me... feeling good inside, you know?

I was like... "Hmm. Cool."
Xzilen
10:25 pm | November 25, 2002
Tense man... I like it


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