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Comments for 'New Destiny'



Helljumper
10:03 pm | May 21, 2004
I don't think Naval ship Captains are that badass. Why would Marines use rocket launchers aboard their own ship?

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The Collector
1:48 am | May 21, 2004
Hmmm well this is pretty good. mmmmmmmmmm U could do better i can tell u were going very far with this. Good luck with the first chapter
Elite Zov
8:04 pm | May 20, 2004
Raall cool, especially the ending is kindda nice for humans, but sad the story is short. You should write a little something how your For Funners look like. :) hay, maybe you'll like my new story seriece called Silver Blooded. Read, and tell me what YOU think.
Darkest90
4:08 am | May 20, 2004
The ending was kind of wierd but otherwise, intriguing.
Horror
7:48 pm | May 19, 2004
I liked the story, and plotline, but it moved a bit fast. You could have lengthened some of the descriptions. Lastly use spellcheck and after a period goes a space.
No one
6:50 pm | May 19, 2004
Good story but at start do u mean Redemption, because REdempton pretty gay.


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