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Comments for 'Force 81 Prologue: A Faithless Reaper' |
Dispraiser
5:48 am | December 24, 2002
I only read the stories that don't suck, which explains the good reveiws thing...
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saturn
8:10 am | December 23, 2002
meaning that you write good comments for mostly everybody. it takes time to read everything and to comment on most of them. besides, some people would get itchy if i said "this is the best one ive read all month", meaning that they might feel cold bout it.
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Disprasier
4:21 am | December 22, 2002
Respectible? I did nothing special here, just told him what I usually would if the work is good, and doesn't... suck...
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saturn
7:52 am | December 21, 2002
wow. dispraiser conducts himself in a very respectible manner. be sure to support his work too. reminds me of some old buddies.
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Dispraiser
9:54 pm | December 18, 2002
Yeah, nice job. It is hard to write up a half decent (or better as yours is) sniper story. This is an unusually short reply from me, so that means taht it was good!
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saturn
4:52 am | December 16, 2002
oh ya, i never write such long comments. tahts a good sign for u.
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saturn
4:45 am | December 16, 2002
omg! you're on fire! the extinguisher.....aw man....i have to go all the way to engineering to get it.....shoobies. Wow, very very fine, like jlo. excellent story, its very professional and doesnt seem rushed. this is the best one ive read this month, the others have repeating problems. just minor errors but otehrwise good diction.
Example of quality diction: "reflected off the engine housing of the right Ghost". maybe more exploding head descriptions. after all, it is a high-powered militay-grade rifle.
as of now, ill be rooting for u. good job rookie. so i c uve been writing for a while. thats lotsa practice, dont stop now just cause ur new or waht ppl say. like my first series, Brethren of Saturn, got popular quickly, so im sure with fresh talent u will move up quickly.
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NobleWard
3:56 am | December 16, 2002
lol, actually I have never heard of the band Factory 81. I had started writing a novel in 7th and 8th grade, and Force 81 was the name of the elite fighting squad I had envisioned. I liked the whole number thing so I figured I would throw it in to this series.
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Southern...
One of my goals in writing this series was to try and capture more of the reality of a war like the one described in the Halo world. You would have to think of all that each of those soldiers lost, how each of their personalities would have been changed by a war and what the war have turned them into. The actual story line is going go into Veer's history and some of the other main character's philosophies and personalities.
Thanks for the input.
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Xzilen
9:13 pm | December 14, 2002
Force 81...
No chance you got that from the band Factory 81?
good story man
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Soutern Pride
7:41 pm | December 14, 2002
I like your story a lot. It was really realistic compared to a lot of other fan fics. The amount of detail was good too. I would love to read mor efrom this series.
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