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Comments for 'Beckoning of Doom Ch. 3: The Last Stand' |
OpeningAct
5:09 am | July 13, 2004
Sweet! I'll e-mail you!
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Nick Kang
12:02 am | July 13, 2004
Woah! People are offering me co-ops left and right! Sure OA, I'll do a fic with you.
NK
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OpeningAct
8:53 pm | July 12, 2004
Hey Nick, would you like to write a series with me? I've got a good plot that will be alright if I do it on my own but will be amazing if I get a great fan fic writer like you to help me on it.
Post your reply here and I'll e-mail you. That is of course if you want to.....
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Nick Kang
6:39 pm | July 12, 2004
Thanks everyone!
Guess what, I'm gonna supposedly gonna be one of the last survivors of the HBO army! Severian posted it on HFS!
NK
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DF-Pliskin, DF-Christie, and Gallagher
5:17 pm | July 12, 2004
When we read this story, we were like "This is good." we just wanted to say good luck. oh Nick, if ur planning to write a series together with cold, trust us. unless u really want to, its going to be hard.
Good luck
Team HaLo
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DF-Pliskin, DF-Christie, and Gallagher
5:17 pm | July 12, 2004
When we read this story, we were like "This is good." we just wanted to say good luck. oh Nick, if ur planning to write a series together with cold, trust us. unless u really want to, its going to be hard.
Good luck
Team HaLo
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Team Halo
5:11 pm | July 12, 2004
when we saw this, we were like "HOLY SHIT! THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME!" but then we read the stupid Nick haters comments, then we were like "Those stupid mother fuckers. they should die by getting raped or something." but anyways, good story
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Dave Luck
5:09 pm | July 12, 2004
That was HILARIOUS!!
I think... Aww geez... I'm going to need new pants!
I'm laughing myself wet at that story. Oh, and thank you, Cold Blooded, for mentioning us Canadians. I am proud to be a Canadian, and I am proud to have Americans as my next door neighbor. Unfortunately for me, I don't know how to drive a car, so I can't get down there, unless I do lots of walking....
Anyhow, before I go out to get myself a pair of skintight, too-small, crotch-hugging leather pants, (Yes, I am very retro, aint I?) I wanted to say this...
I liked this story for more than one reason. It flowed smoothly, it was thrilling, and it was well-written by someone named Nick Kang.
Oh, and just to make sure you know I'm not plain weird, skintight leather pants were the style in the '80's, the golden age of Rock. You know, tight leather pants, with red fabric sewn over the crotch, along with your awesome, '80's styled hair covering one side of your face with two knots of hair at the front and back of your head, along with silver necklaces, and ripped shirt...
DUDE! That's awesome! Get the Rock CD's out!
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Severian
4:21 pm | July 12, 2004
Ignore the spick boy... He's just getting more amused by our fires of ridicule. I'm sending in a story named "The Invasion of the Noobs" probably by the next update, and be assured that spick boy will be in there.
"And then, as the sun rose over the hazy fields of battle, as men and women of HBO Fanfiction fought on beneath overturned tanks, above hills and on the beaches, through the tunnels and in the cities, above the air and in the space- slowly, the numbers of the insidious sect of Covenant known as the noobs decreased, thinned by the continuing stream of well-aimed fire.
"But then, as the skilled soldiers of HBO felt the hope of victory enter their heart, a pink-suited figure appeared in the horizon- dripping with flowers and cum, and holding a Barbie doll in one hand and a giant-dildo launcher in the other, the Spanish Spartan appeared, and without delay began assaulting the forces of good with his ultra-gay-powers, born of continous homosexual rampancies."
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343 Salty Beans
2:24 am | July 12, 2004
I think I just creamed my pants. That was goooooooooooooooooood....
343SB
PS: I'm just kidding about that first part.
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Nick Kang
12:59 am | July 12, 2004
Hey Odin, between the action you'll have to get your hands on a comp and tell us how the war's goin.
NK
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Slit Throat
9:52 pm | July 11, 2004
You can't wish any mental diseases on him Awacar; he already has them all! I wish there were more though…
oh well.
Since the truth has already been spread here, I'll move on.
BTW, good story!
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Awacar
8:49 pm | July 11, 2004
SS, clean your ass with a cactus next time, will ya? For me? Please lick it afterwards too, to feel the taste everyone of us feels whenever you post, the taste of true disgust.
Afterwards, I advise you to clean your mouth with pure sodium hydroxide, should have dual purposes at that time.
Warning: do not let the chemical get into the shithead of yours, it will cleanse out all the weight of crap that keeps your head upon your shoulders. it might cause your head to fall of, meaning that your utter stupidity will spread, and not only manifest itself though your own despicable actions.
Death is really nasty to wish upon someone, but in your case I see no problem with some serious diseases.
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CoLd BlooDed
7:48 pm | July 11, 2004
Finally, I got one of my stories through, titled "Eternal Confinement."
It's a very SeverianofUrth-esque story. :)
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CoLd BlooDed
7:28 pm | July 11, 2004
S.S - you are nothing more than a fascist asshole with no friends whatsoever, I completely agree with Nick Kang. Wishing that someone DIES is COMPLETELY fucked up! If I met you, I'd probably beat the shit out of you.
SoS.Odin, we'll all miss you, good luck in the Corps, man, and good luck. I know I'll miss you, don't mean to sound gay, but when you experience someone you know who is leaving forever it just kindof touches you. Again, good luck, make the Americans and Canadians proud.
Fuck spanish spartan.
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Nick Kang
6:30 pm | July 11, 2004
You have absolutely no respect for the American Military, do you, spick spartan. I got pretty mad when you were flaming people for no reason on other comments sections, but now that you not only did it on MY comments section, but dissed the great men and women of the U.S. Military, let alone wished that Odin would die, I AM INFURIATED!!!
You will go to Hell, spick spartan, and when you do, I will laugh. Laugh and laugh. I hope Satan will shove a pineapple up your ass as punishment for such heinous acts as these.
Not everyone was able to see my comment about you on the last update, so here it is:
Spanish Spartan is a fag who likes to make fun of people because of issues that he hasn't worked out yet, and never will work out, since he lacks the mental capacity to play a xylophone. When he dies, the world will be a slightly better place, although it won't stop our society from sinking into hell. When he grows up, Sexist Spartan will live in a trailer and sit in front of a computer screen that hasn't yet been hooked up to the computer and wonder how to turn it on. Although he has the basic IQ of a shovel, SS has somehow managed to spell the words 'idiot' and 'fag'.
I hope that makes everyone laugh at you and insult you. You fucking Insurgent sympathizer. I should call the cops on you right now. I'll give you three days to change before I'm reporting you to Wu.
NK
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NightBalde
5:58 pm | July 11, 2004
Hey spanish spartan u BEANER shut the fuck up u asshole
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NightBalde
5:58 pm | July 11, 2004
u really need to shut the fuckin hell up u BEANER SS go take some coins off the street and get rich
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spanish spartan
4:59 pm | July 11, 2004
This was actually a good story. I apologize for the way ive been acting. PSYCE! Fuck NK I hope SOS dies in combat. GO IRAQI INSURGENTS!
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Black Titan
4:57 pm | July 11, 2004
Good story nk, and to SOS,go MARINES! GO USA. GOOD LUCK.
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romac1991
1:48 pm | July 11, 2004
LATER ODIN, GOOD LUCK IN THE MILITARY
ROMAC1991
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Nick Kang
12:34 pm | July 11, 2004
Cya Odin... :(
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SOS.Odin
11:56 am | July 11, 2004
bet u guys were wondering what happened to me :D
well, i hope you guys were wonderin :(
anyways. pimp story. keep writing. u'll only get better. unfortunately. you prolly wont see me again. today at 4:30 july 11, 2004. i will leave for the military entrence processing station in kansas city. i will take tests and get a physical. then i will stay the night at the marriot hotel. then leave for san diego in the morning for basic training. IM BECOMING A MARINE!
OORAH! good luck to all and have a great life. i know i will.
Semper Fi
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Severian
11:51 am | July 11, 2004
thanks, nick
argh... technically twelve right now, right? you know, I'd have never known... I'd have believed you if you said you were twenty, or even older. Your writing certainly backs you up.
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Nick Kang
11:47 am | July 11, 2004
Technically, I'm not 13 yet. :P
I read your story, Severian. I thought I posted a comment on it. Must not have. I've been under a lot of stress lately, and it's temporarily affecting my memory.
And I don't care about you cluttering up my comments page. Whatever helps you helps me by giving me something good to read.
NK
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Severian
11:13 am | July 11, 2004
This is really shameless, and also pretty damn stupid, and sorry for cluttering up your page, but I am going to self-advertise... Can some more people (besides CoLd and Helljumper) read my stories down WAY below? I'm tired of having basically 3~4 people reading things I write.
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Severian
11:11 am | July 11, 2004
Very, very nice job. I really have to wonder what I could have been doing when -I- was thirteen...
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Chuckles
7:46 am | July 11, 2004
Steady throughout, Nick. I like to see writers try and get into the covies' heads. Nothing against how you did it (and you did it just fine), but I would love to see someone develop covie culture as more alien and less like us. I thought that the rallying speech by the covie leader at the end was fine, but it would be interesting to see them do something without such a strong taste of our own culture. Oh well, I'm done whining.
Solid story. I'll look for the follow-up.
C.T. Clown
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CoLd BlooDed
4:12 am | July 11, 2004
Actually, Pho, I hit puberty when I was twelve. My voice is pretty deep, everything a teenager pretty much has. Except the horrible acne and matted hair.
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Pho
3:59 am | July 11, 2004
holy crap, you guys aren't even in puberty yet?! hahahahahahahaha i'm just kidding dudes. don't ban me. please? haha.
but damn i can't even write half as good as you now.
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CoLd BlooDed
2:00 am | July 11, 2004
It's cool, Nick, because you write much better than I did when I was twelve. That's when I started writing on this site.
Now I'm thirteen, huzzah. Still, we gotta do a co-op series, or I'll virtually kick you.
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Nick Kang
12:50 am | July 11, 2004
Thanks Dave, that's a very encouraging comment. Brightened my night :)
NK
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Jessica
12:41 am | July 11, 2004
Hey Severian, i read your stories...i just don't always have the time to post after i read them...i'll go post a comment in your section riiiight now...
Jess
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Dave Luck
12:03 am | July 11, 2004
Holy Crap! Not Thirteen YET?! Many kids that I know personally who are under thirteen only type the first few letters of a word.
You write well! In fact, you shine with a light of your own in this dark section. You've actually got something that is rare in the section: The patience to actually type, and write.
I don't know if the n00bs are making me soft again, but I'm glad someone out there actually cares. Along with Cold Blooded, 343 Salty Beans, and some others.
I feel as if there is a light at the end of the dark tunnel I am walking through. As if a light has pierced the darkness, banishing it to the corners of the world.
- Dave.
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Nick Kang
9:00 pm | July 10, 2004
Thanks everyone...yeah, CoLd, I have MSN, but I don't have a name for it yet...I'll make one soon as I get back from my dad's house, which will be Tuesday.
NK
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CoLd BlooDed
7:35 pm | July 10, 2004
I spotted a few errors, very minor ones that I almost missed. But I'll let you figure them out for yourself.
Anyways, Nick, I'm glad you've posted this, it's given me something to do while I sit here. Definately worth the read. Your spelling and overall grammar is awesome, the way you can paint a picture into someones mind with simple vocabulary is spectacular.
I'm starting to think we should do a series together, do you have MSN?
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Spacefan
7:19 pm | July 10, 2004
Okay, Now you've got me wondering if there are more enemy Covenant coming through the door or someone else...Please update soon.
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Ajax
5:20 pm | July 10, 2004
Cool ending. The part where the four hunters hold off the attackers is sweet.
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Nick Kang
2:36 pm | July 10, 2004
Thanks! I'll have to start working on the next one pretty quick.
NK
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OpeningAct
1:08 pm | July 10, 2004
It was steady throughout and great nearer to the end. I'm really looking forward to the next part!
Good job, man!
OA
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