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Comments for 'Operation: Stingray'



The Author
4:39 pm | March 27, 2004
I think I'm gonna make chapter 2 a bit more Matrix-based, so when it gets to a place where there's a lot of action, imagine matrix music in the background.
The Author
2:44 pm | March 27, 2004
Well I've been working on Ch. 2, but it won't turn out the way I want it to, so it may be a while until I complete it.
The Author
12:35 pm | March 27, 2004
Yeah, I've been working on my writing skill over the time the Fan-Fiction section was down, thinking it would help my stories.
Flu
5:46 am | March 27, 2004
Nice. Short, but nice. There was some nice descriptive imagery in there. Keep working in this same direction. Add more descriptions about the characters themselves - what makes them tick.
ONI_operative_343
4:38 am | March 27, 2004
oh man...

"It looked almost as if the Earth had opened up and belched Hell into the atmosphere."

THAT is awesome dude! i really liked this story, next part's gonna be good. i just have one question... is the UNSC ship going to be a big part of the story? cuz if it is, hearing more about that, like weaponry, crew, design, etc. would be neat

very awesome!


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