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Comments for 'MJOLNIR, Chapter One'



MasterGrunt
10:15 pm | October 15, 2003
Good plot and all except for the strip club. Like a senior officer is gonna waste time in that place.
Walker
3:32 am | October 15, 2003
I usually only sign with a "Semper Fi" when I'm feeling rather patriotic or good about myself or serious about what I just said. Usually if it's just an offhand comment, I won't sign it. Or sometimes I just sign because I feel like it. Great example of that: now.

Semper Fi

-Walker
Sergeant B
1:01 am | October 15, 2003
Hey Walker, aren't you supposed to say "Semper Fi, Walker"? Or you don't right Semper Fi when you're mad or you don't right Semper Fi when you're happy? Just wonderin'...........
Walker
9:43 pm | October 14, 2003
Well, may your next post be posted. But if I may quote from the submission form:

"Misuse of this particular button will not only get your fiction deleted, but will get you banned from the entire section."

I have the sneaking suspicion that that's the reason COTGB 3 didn't get posted... though I'm reasonably sure I went in and carefully clicked the non-poem button.
Sergeant B
6:39 pm | October 14, 2003
Walker. I haven't submitted an actual STORY in a long time because I'm still working on it. Can't think of a new story name and I'm not really sure how to begin it. I want to make the readers happy with a good beginning and ending so that's hard. And I'm thinking of "redoing" the Courageous Pride series. "First one" was a screwup. Really bad. I even made the wrong characters.*cheeks go red, embarrassed*
So, maybe expect my new story by Friday(If things go well). Next week if I'm having a brain problem.............
Walker
11:45 am | October 14, 2003
Well, I haven't seen any new fanfiction from you in a while, and Louis Wu's submission page is very clear on what happens if you screw up once, like you did with your second song: you don't get your fanfiction posted anymore. Currently I'm waiting for my Grunt Brigade Part 3 to come in, and if it doesn't in the next post I'm going to resubmit it and if it doesn't come in then, I'm most likely banned. Pray for me! Or don't! Whatever.

Semper Fi

-Walker
Sergeant B
10:30 am | October 14, 2003
Probably not Walker. Wait, do they give notices if you got banned?? Or you're banned outright. Did I use the right word outright? Or should it be "just like that"?
Sergeant B
10:30 am | October 14, 2003
How was I banned?
Sergeant B
10:30 am | October 14, 2003
Am I banned?
Sergeant B
10:30 am | October 14, 2003
If yes, what did I do?
Sergeant B
10:30 am | October 14, 2003
If no, oh thank god!!
Sergeant B
10:28 am | October 14, 2003
Why Walker?
monitor101
9:56 pm | October 13, 2003
Sweet story Nemesis 'cough' "Shade" 'cough'. Strip club damnnnnnn! Keep them coming! 10/10
Nemesis
7:06 pm | October 13, 2003
the beginning will start off slow, but do wait, it will get better 8D
Walker
2:42 pm | October 13, 2003
Hey, again, nice one, Nemesis. Sergeant B, have you been banned from the section?
Sergeant B
12:12 pm | October 13, 2003
Good man!!
SOS.Odin
3:27 am | October 13, 2003
hahhahaha
havent read this yet but the prologue was pimp
lookin forward to whatever forerunners talkin
bout =D
FOrunnER
2:40 am | October 13, 2003
Keep them coming, strip club? Ahh, think of the possibilities (mouth waters)


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