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Comments for 'Sniper'



Sarge
3:21 am | May 31, 2003
I found that hardly any of these stories hold my intrest anymore... hopefully with Halo 2 will come some new talent
pj-NYkr90
9:14 pm | May 28, 2003
It was okay. I liked it. But you could have made it more in depth. There were too many mistakes. Helpful Hint; use a word proccesor. You can copy and paste the final copy into the Fanfiction dorm
Anthony Coronado
8:42 pm | May 28, 2003
OMG...next time, write it using a word processor, not the Submit FanFiction page...it really helps. I totally lost interest halfway through your story because of these innumerable errors.
scope
5:53 pm | May 26, 2003
8.5/10 Indent next time
Wiley Kimball
1:42 pm | May 26, 2003
I liked this, just [indent] and italicize what people are thinking using [i]blablabla[/i].

8.75/10


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