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Comments for 'Chapter 2: The Past Revealed'



Guardian
8:18 pm | July 1, 2004
late comment not only did you rip off E3, you didn't even write it correctly. The Warthog with the Guass Rifle, not the idea of a Mini MAC, Guass rifle, anyways it was taken out by One Brute single handedly, not two...late comment
Guardian
11:02 am | June 20, 2004
By the way read the fanfictions by Wado, he has some extremely well written ones, and look at the code, after that start writing your ones
Guardian
11:00 am | June 20, 2004
with Solidus Snake, remember me from the previous comment, ::sigh:: you need to work on this seriously.
Solidus Snake
1:01 am | June 20, 2004
And yeah Guardian is right, work on this story, proofread, edit, stuff like that.
Solidus Snake
12:59 am | June 20, 2004
Oh wait never mind Guardian, I misread your comment...
Solidus Snake
12:57 am | June 20, 2004
Guardian, what?
Michael Montazeri
4:21 pm | June 19, 2004
Dude, the whole point of that was to write the continuation of first strike, and make it that people who have seen the videos can be familiar with what happens.
Solidus Snake
4:55 am | June 19, 2004
You ripped of the E3 Halo 2 demo!
LostRock
4:05 pm | June 18, 2004
looks really slapped together.


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