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Comments for 'Halo: The Aftermath'



Steele
12:59 am | June 18, 2003
They were kinda dumb...
'Nosolee
12:43 pm | June 17, 2003
Yeah, what those guys said, but it was good: 8.25/10
pooman
11:29 am | June 17, 2003
ya, that story was pretty good ill read the next one, i agree with wiley k a prophet would nevere be at a battle field untill the battle was over and mc is kinda stupid he said "thier is an airstrip with bombs" i think thier would already be bombs at a airstrip if it was a milltary airstrip, i dont mean to be meen im just givin you a heads up for your next story

8.5/10
Wiley K
11:13 am | June 17, 2003
Not to shabby, just a few things to point out:
1: Cortana isn't that dumb
2: They were farther away from Earth than that. I don't think they could talk to each other from that range.
3: I don't think a Prophet would be at the battlefield until the battle was over.

8/10


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