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Comments for 'Super Covenant -part1- Handicapped Elites?'



Person
10:05 pm | April 14, 2003
Actually I think this IS a good story, keep on writing.
Sarge
10:30 pm | April 11, 2003
In other words diablo is being nice and not telling you your story sucks...
el_halo_diablo
2:26 am | April 9, 2003
this story was...ummm..it...ah hell I give up. I'm not really sure what kinda comment to give you, but I wish you better luck next time.
gruntkiller
5:02 pm | April 8, 2003
way too short not that interesting and well didn't play up well on the last chapter
AUTHOR
3:16 pm | April 8, 2003
ATTENTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
For some odd reason whenever you click part 2 of my story it is the same as part 1, if you want to read part 2 than go to "more by this author" and read it.
Anonymous
3:16 pm | April 8, 2003
ATTENTION!!
if you want to read part 2 go to more by this author, not collapsed listing
Anonymous
3:16 pm | April 8, 2003
actually go to read this series
Anonymous
3:16 pm | April 8, 2003
actually go to read this series
Sarge
12:34 am | April 8, 2003
ow sh-- yep still sharp oh my god did you have to put that in there?
author
3:23 pm | April 7, 2003
i just submited part 2, hope you like it.
author
3:56 pm | April 4, 2003
bah, hypocrites. Thanx to those who appreciate it. part 2 is in process.
Dispraiser
8:42 pm | April 3, 2003
Flah no loke. I could do that to make my comments unique, but I won't. We like originalit, but not originality of spite. You did this just to look like an original person. Come up with some other ways. I'm not going to grade this, it isn't too conformic and is nowhere near to being gradable...
James Kinsella
7:57 pm | April 3, 2003
It's original alright, but a little weird. Keep it up, I guess.
gruntkiller
7:50 pm | April 3, 2003
man, it was well... how can i describe it, it had originality...its definitly one of a kind...is this supposed to be a comedy? the first part was pretty funny. interesting second part. good job. if i were to have to compare it to a movie id have to say it wasn't captivating, but enjoyable. definitly not the best here but its definitly not the worst. some form of covenant spartan does sound cool.
Tank
7:44 pm | April 3, 2003
There's original, and then there's physically trying to walk from the flock. I gues if you want to really satisfy you have to find the small area where it isn't to off the track and not to stale. While hopefully making it well written and maybe even epic? But the idea of Covenant Spartans has some major cool.
Author
2:00 pm | April 3, 2003
Is this original enough for you gruntkiller and co.?!


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