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Comments for 'Enigma: part 1'



Dispraiser
1:37 am | April 9, 2003
... Sorry... D.
Steele
9:03 pm | April 8, 2003
Yeah, it sorta needs correct grammar and a plot. But it is well-written, which is kinda unusual for most new people(you are new aren't you?) But I can't say too much, my first one was nothing but straight action, but it was well written. Anyway this recieves a 70(Average). I took off for the no plot and lack of background info...
James Kinsella
12:03 am | April 8, 2003
Kinda Dumb. I mean when did this happen. It needs indents and a little spelling checks. Other than that it was okay, I guess...


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