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Comments for 'Humanity's Last Hope: Part 2'



MasterCD
6:16 am | March 28, 2004
Curiouser and curiouser. It makes a bit more sense now, but maybe that's cos I'm insane and only partly living in reality. And I mean that in a serious way. Advice wise, break it up a little. Big blocks of text is scary.
spitfirekid1133
10:55 pm | April 24, 2003
nice, keep working
Steele
10:39 pm | April 15, 2003
Not too shabby. 7.5/10. Keep it up.
thoridan
3:11 am | April 15, 2003
Very good but you said 2 twice there is no one but it was a very good story.
Ishkabibbl
6:25 pm | April 14, 2003
And before anyone needs to make a "smart" comment, I like the word dozens thats why i'm always using it.
Ishkabibbl
3:21 pm | April 14, 2003
My bad, this is supposed to be one. Sorry for any confusion.
Sarge
1:46 pm | April 14, 2003
OKay you posted part 2 twice and theirs no part 1???


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