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Comments for 'The Georgetown (Part 1)'



shawn
11:18 am | April 29, 2004
good
'Nosolee
8:09 pm | April 24, 2004
Hell yeah Mainevent, hell yeah. This kid knows it. Balance with balance. Realistic Poopchutes.
Mainevent
9:36 pm | April 22, 2004
Six MACs are totally unbelievable, but totally cool. You just have to have a kickass covenant to counter it. ;)

Think about it author...
Jin1
8:47 pm | April 22, 2004
I have to agree with MC's Cousin, this fanfic is totally unbeliveable. I give this story 3/10.
MC's Cousin
7:17 pm | April 22, 2004
Finally Helljumper, we have agreed. Ah, let teh good times roll.

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Helljumper
6:41 pm | April 22, 2004
I disagree Nosolee, there should be a certain amount of realistim to fanfiction and 6 MAC is unbelievable.

ODST
'Nosolee
6:25 pm | April 22, 2004
He can dream about 6 MACs if he wants, he can even write about it. It doesn't HAVE to be believable. It fanFICTION, that's wut makes HFF so cool, its an unbelievable twist on the unbelievable.
MC's Cousin
2:13 pm | April 22, 2004
Nucks?
"Sir, firing the nucks!"

Anyway. First of all, no ship has six MACs. The PoA only had one. It used magnetic field recyclers and boost capasitors to fire three successive rounds (H:tFoR; page 275).
The mission also sounded off. They wouldn't do that kind of thing. The Han was anlone, but it was not going on a combat mission. They would have sent more than one ship. Although you could use that as an interesting story bit.
And your military stuff was off. The speech sounded a little off as well.

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