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Comments for 'HALO: The Marine Chronicles'



Tygpj
1:16 am | March 12, 2003
Not bad at all, but next time try to split it up to give some suspense to the story. Hope to see another story from you.
neroduso
5:23 pm | February 26, 2003
brilliant!!
el_halo_diablo
4:36 am | February 25, 2003
OK whoever told you that Nolimits4csk is a total liar. Oh and Matt was right about how many marines were there. 300 to 800 marines were on Halo. remember, it was just one ship that went to halo. All that happens in the Legendary ending is *caution spoiler for those who ahven't beaten Maw on legendary* A marine, and Elite hug, and the Elite does is grab the marine's ass. Thats all.
Nolimits4csk
11:51 pm | February 21, 2003
Being an American, that was probably the best fan fiction writing so far. (I had a lot of things written, but I was stupid and hit reset) The quotes shouldn't be smashed together, unless that's how you like it. The battles were excellent.

To Matt: More Almost the entire Human population was wiped out in Halo. However, it wasn't shown. Spartan II was the only Marine left. In the extended ending (which can be activated by defeating the Maw on Legendary) Master Chief supposedly travels to Earth and finds several million people populating the planet.

To the author: Great story. Keep writing stories.
Matt
3:40 am | February 19, 2003
Good story however It seems unusual for The Maser Cheif to tell a marine to "get infront of me" or any other Spartan II for that matter
Pilot 415
1:43 am | February 16, 2003
i'm an idot i spelled Lenin wrong
Pilot 415
12:18 pm | February 15, 2003
Being Russian loved the Stalin comment at the end even though Linen was a greater revolutionary, all in all good story but next time try to cut it up at last a little
Traumatised Marine
9:06 pm | February 13, 2003
This is my bed time reading for tonight! Let's hope it brings some fiction-inspiring dreams...
Matt
3:24 pm | February 13, 2003
Great story! However I don't think there were one hundred thousand marine casualties on halo, it was more like 800 max if even that many
el_halo_diablo
4:27 am | February 13, 2003
I really hope someone reads this, because this author deseves credit for writing such a large amount of words.
neroduso
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Awesome story. Really excellent, I hope to see more stories of this caliber from you in the future. Honore was great as well
Jillybean
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
LARGE amount of words indeed. But very good. I'll finish it later, but it's been done really well.

Happy now ;)


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