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Comments for 'Halo: A Troubled Galaxy Ch. 4 (Final)'



Ghost
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Hey can you please rate my story. Thanks
Mainevent
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
5-6/10

Thin plot.-1

Thin characters.-1

Lack of detail.-1

Good enough spelling.+1

Good enough grammar.+1

No pseudocode.-1

You can make a logical progression of events in a moderate to easily readible format. +3 to 4
Ghost
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
Sorry guys ive decided not to post a all in one of my story Sorry i have my reasons
ghost
12:01 am | November 30, -0001
i hope you liked my story


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