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Comments for 'Flood Survival'



pooman
4:03 pm | June 16, 2003
great story 11/10
gruntkiller
12:03 am | June 15, 2003
that was...how can i say this... the best god damn story ive seen here since el halo diablo and wado had series going on
'Nosolee
1:03 pm | June 13, 2003
Yeah(to Steele), he does this Pro/Con thing for the comment pages of other stories. Its actually not not that bad of an idea...
SilentHunter
12:57 am | June 13, 2003
Good, I think it deserves an........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................you're scrolling arent you?...9/10
Steele
12:16 am | June 13, 2003
Con???
'Nosolee
12:11 am | June 13, 2003
f***, sorry about below
'Nosolee
12:09 am | June 13, 2003
I gues that's a con...
'Nosolee
12:09 am | June 13, 2003
I gues that's a con...
Steele
10:33 pm | June 12, 2003
I give it a 8.5/10. The problem is that your sentences really don't flow. Your verbs are the wrong tense or off in number.

Work on that and this'll be pretty good.
'Nosolee
5:33 pm | June 12, 2003
Liked the first person perspective: 9/10
Gasmask
4:19 pm | June 12, 2003
Very professionally done. I'll be waiting for the next one.
Wiley K
4:08 pm | June 12, 2003
Cool.
9/10
harley
3:07 am | June 12, 2003
Good story liked it alot keep going can't wait for another
scope
1:15 am | June 12, 2003
9.5/10 Nice touch


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