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Comments for 'Souls of War.: Part 1: Tides of Battle'



SPARTAN-117
5:22 pm | May 5, 2004
I loved this story. sarge your THE MAN ill miss you.
SPARTAN-039
1:53 am | May 5, 2004
this is great story but did this even happen? none the less i liked it.
Dark-NiTe
3:22 am | February 18, 2004
If anyone comes back to this, i just wanna say thanks for these comments. I didn't expect to see those :) Anyways, read the next ones if u want to see what became of Sgt. Johnson...
Tom09
4:14 am | February 17, 2004
Hey, I really enjoyed reading your story. You seemed to be very exsperienced in writing, your detail is amazing. As others have said i enjoyed the non-combat action and was suprised that the sarge was almost killed (i'm sure he will be back) but then again i guess that adds a sort of suspense. I am looking forward to read more from you. -Tom
darkslayer869
1:12 am | February 17, 2004
Wow that was a good short scene man. Like Nick Kang sayed "Plenty of non-combat action" i really enjoyed reading it, Keep up the good work.
sexy
1:09 am | February 17, 2004
Great story man. Awesome action! Total intesesness... You would'd kill the sarge would you??? Anyway way to go kid i'll be hoping to hear more form you.
Nick Kang
2:26 pm | February 16, 2004
You killed Sarge! It was a great story and all, plenty of action in a non-battle type of way, but how would the story progress without the best Marine in the game!?!
retardedmonkey
11:35 pm | February 15, 2004
how long does it take after you submit a story for them to put it up? and why did you kill him is he alive make another story
Helljumper
6:02 pm | February 15, 2004
Good one.
MC's Cousin
12:27 pm | February 15, 2004
Well, good beachness action. BUT YOU JUST CAN"T ACT LIKE YOU KILLED JOHNSON! Of course I noticed how you let him float away. Perhaps I put to much credit on you by leaving the possibility of him living. You know that he did right. Just look at the Halo story. Sarge was with Keyes when they were in the "weapons cache" so, you know. And if you've read FS you know he's still alive.

Signing Off


MCC
retaredmonkey
6:49 pm | February 14, 2004
you killed sgt. johnson... you bastard! ha i kid but why? any way good story reminds me of normandy(i was not in normandy)


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