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Comments for 'Slow to Perfection (part 3)'



saturn
10:46 pm | April 17, 2003
try so of diablo's grunty grape capri-sun.
James Kinsella
2:13 am | April 17, 2003
Gotta find something to satisfy my grunty thirst...
James Kinsella
2:09 am | April 17, 2003
I'm was sitting here and feeling my stomach rumble and I saw something. The title sounds a lot like an ad for coffee beens or a good steak, you know, "slow cooked to perfection." Wow, I should stop talking about food, it's making me even more hungry...
Sarge
1:53 am | April 17, 2003
Usually my 2000 word stories are like 16kp so...
el_halo_diablo
4:24 pm | April 16, 2003
Hey....it is alot like my old series "Cry for a Hero"
el_halo_diablo
4:23 pm | April 16, 2003
lol mabye you should have spread out your series over a length of days, but whatever. :)
Arthur Wellesly
2:20 pm | April 16, 2003
Yea, this was an awsome series. I really enjoyed reading them.
Berconius
2:17 am | April 16, 2003
This is definitely a great series. It's like an amped up version of cry for a hero... except with a car full of typos that you should check out...

other then that, I like it, we'll see how it stacks up against Wado's stuff but so far so good. Speaking of which, has anyone heard from him?

I may just start writing before break is out but I don't want to make a fool of my self just yet so ... please do so in my stead, ok? :)
Steele
10:30 pm | April 15, 2003
Is it 32kb, cause the thing only says 30-32k. Not kb, but I assumed it meant kb too. But most of my stories stay in the 32-38kb range and they've all gotten posted. Maybe we should get Louis Wu to clarify it.
Corey Lyon
9:16 pm | April 15, 2003
Sorry for not identing. But thanx for the great feed back.
James Kinsella
7:46 pm | April 15, 2003
Wow, that took a while. I'm going to propose that you spread your stories out a little. It would make them easier to read and give you more in depth comments on your work. STNOIS!
Traumatised Marine
6:45 pm | April 15, 2003
How could you send so much? I thought there was a 32kb limit???
Shadow Spartan
5:54 pm | April 15, 2003
geez, these are long stories, but really good. i noticed some spelling problems and the indent thing, but they can be fixed...this is still a good story, keep them coming


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